Re: Chapter 1 [Hi no Kuni + Kaminari no Kuni] « Reply #15 on Apr 10, 2009, 12:45pm »
As he watched one of the opponents picking up his shuriken and folding it, Sasuke finished his preparation. It was time to act. He had heard Naruto's warning, but decided that it was not worth listening to, like much of what he said. He was done being careful for now. They needed to take the offensive now. With a little bit of effort this time, Sasuke's body flickered and disappeared as he used the infamous Shunshin. However, this time, he wanted to get in front of his opponents, not behind them. As his body reappeared, he was right in front of the path of the enemy that he could tell was about to start running. By the time his body was in full view, anyone that was looking could see something strange about him. Sasuke was flicking his opponents off with both of his middle fingers!
As he had appeared in front of the path of the opponent that was trying to run, he was pretty certain that that one would see him. The other must have noticed Sasuke's sudden appearance nearby (within 4m of the two), but there was a very slight chance that he would not look at him for some reason. Though, Sasuke couldn't think of a reason why he wouldn't look. After all, who would not want to look at an enemy that they were trying to gather information about? If they did watch him though, they would have fallen right into Sasuke's trap. He was using a little trick he had learned thanks to his big brother called Utakata (Ephemeral). Anyone that looked at his fingers would be caught in a very powerful Genjutsu created with the power of the Sharingan. For now, the Genjutsu would just make everything appear as if it was normal, so as not to arouse suspicion. The real fun would begin in their heads when they tried to attack. Meanwhile, if they had been caught by the jutsu, their bodies would move however they moved in the illusion. So, it would be possible for Sasuke to trick them into attacking the air while Naruto or him finished their actual bodies.
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Re: Chapter 1 [Hi no Kuni + Kaminari no Kuni] « Reply #16 on Apr 10, 2009, 2:15pm »
The Jounin closed his eyes to further 'sense' the movement of Sasuke since he couldn't see through the brush, but failed due to his out of range from the 7m as he performed the Shunshin no Jutsu. Within the 1 second that occurred the the enemy performed the technique of his disappearance and reappearance, the Jounin felt the presence of his target by feeling the opponent's electric field being around his presense in front of the two ninja now being within the 4 out of the 7m. He pointed his head up and opened his eyes to see the sky and that is summon, Jin'hane was approaching the area! He quickly performed a hand seal needed in half a second to perform this maneuver. He recognized this speed once before in his own experience, it was indeed the Shunshin. As he looked up towards the sky, he saw the eagle flying over his area silently given the nin-eagles stealth. "Go for it." he thought in his mind as the eagle charged lightning from its body and began to descend!
With the hand seal completed, Ina began to perform his variation of Shunshin, his own technique called the Issen Shunho. His body dispersed via the speed and chakra to appear on the right of Sasuke with 4ft of distance. The eagle swooped down in a downwards going straight vertically down with lightning charged around its body. Ina reached with his right arm and his hand grabbed his weapon by the hilt (the upper part of the hilt and his left arm went up and crossed over to his right, grabbing the hilt as well), the Raiden Daizanto since it was unlocked from it magnetic sheathe from earlier for a swifter motion to draw. The magnet was unlocked making him free to grab the sword with ease and agility and he held the sword performing a rightward horizontal slash while lowering his head, closed his eyes as he lowers his sight away from his arm and fingers and opened them to look at Sasuke's right leg only. "I heard about the Uchiha's potent Kekkei Genkai, the Sharingan and how it can hypnotize its targets with a glance, but this is different. He didn't use his eyes. As long as I don't get in contact with those eyes, I'm all good." he thought as began to crouch and began to perform the slash. When in the slash, it's ability to numb the chakra flow of a person or a jutsu, numbing the circulation of the unknown jutsu he encounter on his partner. With that said, the blade's ability was able to numb the flow, allowing his junior to proceed with his current movements and freeing him from the foreign usage of the jutsu.
With the slash from the right, the eagle descent with its lightning coming at 1mps and made it a lethal double attack coming at the Leaf ninja..
Water, though passive is the essence of emotion. Creating small streams to raging waves. Underestimating water is like your mentality is drowned by ego and pride. If the Creator made the Moon, shouldn't we be all become that swept away water in life?
Re: Chapter 1 [Hi no Kuni + Kaminari no Kuni] « Reply #17 on Apr 10, 2009, 4:42pm »
Naruto was more than slightly irked by the fact that Sasuke didn't take anything he said into consideration for his next move and just acted on his. Naruto which as Sasuke had used Shunshin no Jutsu to get in front of the enemy ninja and flipped them off. Naruto instantly focused his eyes on the two shinobi rather than Sasuke know what just he was about to use, see as how Sasuke's older brother Itachi used it on him five years ago. Naruto noticed that one of the ninjas looked up at the sky instead of at Sasuke and followed his line of sight and found a lone eagle flying over the open space. Naruto put two and two together and figured that the eagle was a summoning for the ninja with the sword. Naruto waited perfectly still while he gathered the Natural Energy need for Sagen Mode. Once in Sage Mode Naruto had charged up 20% of his chakra and hand his hand seal "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu! hesaid and four clones materialized three behind him and one hiding in the brush near Sasuke. As the ninja with the sword made his move so did all of the Narutos. The one behind the blonde sword-wielding ninja Shot out of the bushes and attempted to grab him before his attack on Sasuke would hit. Sasuke you idiot look above you!! the said assuming that the clone had grabbed the ninja who had just attempted to cut Sasuke's leg off.
The real Naruto and his two clones took the opening they had as a chance to take out the ninja who had hopefully fallen for Sasuke's ploy and looked at his hands. All three Narutos jumped out from the bushes the a clone one leading them with his arms outstreched behind his back palms facing the clones. Naruto and the clone on the right put one hand towards the leading clone's. The clone on his right puting his right hand towards him, while the real Naruto his left put his left hand towards him. The clone and the right held his left hand to the other clone who in turn extended his right hand. The clone Naruto was preparing for his Rasen Rengan while the real Naruto and his clone were preparing the Rasengan. Once the jutsu was completed the clone of Naruto continued towards the ninja who was hopefully caught in Sasuke's Genjutsu with the original profiding back up, while the clone on his right changed direction and dashed towards Sasuke with his Rasengan in hand. Once he got within 2m of Sasuke Naruto's clone jumped and extended his left hand, which held his Rasengan, in front of him to hit the summoned eagle. The clone and real Naruto were on course and everything looked as though it worked as the clone brought both hands to his front while the original reached into his tool pouch with both hands and pulled out two Kunai and channeled 2% of his wind chakra into each blade. The clone leading the real Nartuo was just in case Sasuke's plan hadn't worked and things went south. They were in real close range as the clone extended both hands prepared to strike the ninja in front of him, while the real Naruto was prepared to slice his spear into pieces if things didn't work out as hehad hoped they would.
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Re: Chapter 1 [Hi no Kuni + Kaminari no Kuni] « Reply #18 on Apr 10, 2009, 5:44pm »
Visento was turning to run, but low and behold, the raven haired ninja was now in front of him...Flicking him off?!?! Visento was awestruck by the randomness of this sight, and now was in a Genjutsu. He did not know that however, and with Shakujou and Fuuma Shuriken in hand, he took off in a run towards Sasuke. However, out in the real world, Naruto had made a few clone friends, one having two rasengans in its hands, and the real Naruto behind it with two kunai. Visento brought his arms in an x-formation, weapons fully out now, to cross slash Sasuke, but in the real world, he had just been hit in the forearms and chest with a double rasengan. The sheer pain of the jutsus making contact instantly brought Visento out of the genjutsu, only to watch himself shoot through the air at a fast pace. He began spiraling in the air, then started to tumble and roll across the surface of the water before finally slowing down and falling beneath the surface. His forearms were extremely damaged, having a large number of the skin on it shredded, and having some of the muscles destroyed. The impact on his chest resembled a hemisphere crater, two of them, with the curved sides facing each other. The impact made him lose his breath, but skipping across the water and land like a flat rock across a lake knocked him unconscious. He was not dead, but he slowly sank into the water, head first, down deep into the abyss of the lake, which was about 50 yards deep. Visento's Shakujou went flying into the air, along with his Fuuma Shuriken, and oddly, both landed on a small little piece of land, like a mini island, off to the West, landing in the soil and crossing each other like an X.
Re: Chapter 1 [Hi no Kuni + Kaminari no Kuni] « Reply #19 on Apr 10, 2009, 6:20pm »
Sasuke's plan turned out to have only half of the effect that it was intended to. However, he counted on Naruto to be able to pick up whatever scraps were left when he thought up the plan in the first place. No matter what he said about Naruto, when it came down to a fight, he had faith in him. But now was not the time to be congratulating him. One of his opponents had been caught and Sasuke could count on Naruto to finish him off, but the one that had escaped could still be a threat. Even Sasuke's Sharingan could not follow the enemy's movements as he disappeared, but luckily, it took Sasuke only a quarter of a second to find him as he was just to Sasuke's right, the place that Sasuke was used to looking first. As soon as he caught sight of him, however, the enemy detached some kind of sword from its sheath.
Luckily, Sasuke had very keen reflexes. Just as the enemy started his slash, Sasuke jumped high up toward his left, turning a bit in midair to face the enemy that was now being attacked by one of Naruto's Shadow Clones. Meanwhile, Sasuke caught sight of the other enemy getting knocked hard by a Rasen Rengan. Sasuke decided to run after him, just to make sure that he would die, so that he and Naruto could quickly and efficiently take out the Raiton user. As they got to the lake, he quickly focused chakra to his feet so that he would be able to run on the water and then continued to follow the flying enemy until he finally fell unconscious and began to sink into the lake. That guy was as good as dead. But, as he had learned from Orochimaru over 5 years ago, he should never assume that his opponent was dead just because things looked bad for him. It was best to be certain. Thus, Sasuke gathered Raiton chakra to his right hand to form what appeared to be 5 senbon. As the body got lower into the lake, Sasuke jumped as high as he could and, the moment he was no longer touching the lake, fired off all of the Chidori Senbon at the body. As it was in one big body of water, the effect was amplified several fold and electrocuted the former Kumogakure shinobi, draining him of any life he might have had left. Only a moment later, Sasuke landed back on the shore, facing the last remaining enemy.
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Re: Chapter 1 [Hi no Kuni + Kaminari no Kuni] « Reply #20 on Apr 10, 2009, 7:45pm »
"Jin...!!!" Ina shouted as he missed the swing and with his waist in momentum from the waist used to perform the swing. He saw how his comrade was blasted away from the same jutsu and was sent to the lake and Sasuke ran after him and finished him off. "Damn it..!" Ina exclaimed and as made the 360 degree turn, also sensing the clone in his range of his Trait to find the electric fields. With the momentum and crouched low to slight ground level , he with the hilt of the sword now on his left hand he slashed at the clone of Naruto came close to him, hitting it with the edge of the blade. With the edge of the blade in range of the bunshin the contact of it would cut it as with a real person. Being said the Kage bunshin was dealt a solid blow, making it disperse into smoke.
As the eagle with the lightning chakra swooped down toward Sasuke, he saw how his target evades by the means of his loud mouthed partner gave him away. With Jin'hane unable to change his course with that direction changed. He saw one's of Naruto's clone perform a spiral ball of chakra, known as the Rasengan and with his enhanced state, the Sage Mode, normal lightning chakra wouldn't sufficed against a Sage's chakra. With that said, an explosion took place and the lightning was overcame by that of the Rasengan. Jin'hane took this time to utilize the 1% he innately stored in his body to perform the Kawarimi no Jutsu. The Kawarimi turned out to material from the earth such as stones and rock and rained down at Naruto by 4 to 5 rocks.
Ina took the time from that slight pause to rise and hold his blade, channeling 20% of his lightning chakra into the Raiden Daizanto. "Sorry Visen I let you down." Ina thought to himself as his mood became depress, but he had a priority to flee since the odds are not in his favor. "My bad, Konoha Shinobi. Though I could go another round with you, I rather take my choice to regroup. Y'all live up to your reps as the successors to the Sannin. I have to admit." Ina said as he closed his eyes and performed another 360 degree turn with his body with his body and body, the turn gain so much friction in the air that the lightning and electricity began to amplify its power, giving it a pure yellow hue. At the end of his full circle motion, he let go of the hits of the sword and let it fly in a horizontal direction away from Naruto, though hidden and Sasuke on the surface of the water. As the sword span horizantally, it gives the appearance of a disc like shape similar to a Frisbee. Ina took this chance to perform Issen Shunho behind the airborne sword-discus as it was flying and jumped on it adding chakra to his soles of his sandals so he would keep himself stable on it and for him not to spin with the sword's direction to prevent dizziness. He stood on the flying sword as it was still spinning (Think of the Nimbus Cloud of DragonBall) and Ina proceeds to fled on top of it. 6ft from the venture, Ina sighed and reached in his lower right pants pouch of his cargo style wear and drew a kunai wrapped around a slight orange hue around the hilt with his right hand. He turned around and looked backward and threw the kunai so it'll reach 5ft from the two enemies and he performed the hand seal to ignite the tag and it ignites as it glowed a bright light and exploded within the proximity of Sasuke and the hidden Naruto to create a smokescreen as he escaped being at the speed of a Windmill shuriken thrown by strong ninja such as Chouji.
Water, though passive is the essence of emotion. Creating small streams to raging waves. Underestimating water is like your mentality is drowned by ego and pride. If the Creator made the Moon, shouldn't we be all become that swept away water in life?
Re: Chapter 1 [Hi no Kuni + Kaminari no Kuni] « Reply #21 on Apr 10, 2009, 9:17pm »
Naruto watched as the blonde sword wielding ninja killed his clone, and ran off. He dispelled his lones having no further use for them, and left Sage Mode. He looked over at Sasuke and many of thoughts ran through his head, but all in all everything worked out for the best. Naruto really had no complaints about the mission being a success, it was just Sasuke's attitude that kept bugging the everliving hell out him. Even when they first started out he never could stand Sasuke's attitude. "Well things worked out even if you didn't hed my advice. But anyway MISSION COMPLETE! Let's head back to the village, and on way you can tell me what you and Grandma Tsunade were talking about before we left. That's right I never forgot. So spill it Sasuke!"
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Re: Chapter 1 [Hi no Kuni + Kaminari no Kuni] « Reply #22 on Apr 11, 2009, 11:43am »
Sasuke was not quite as happy as Naruto. If it were up to him, he would have chased down that shinobi and captured him. After all, for all they knew, he could have been a valuable source of information. And if not, then it would still be one less enemy they would have to face later on. Unfortunately, Naruto didn't seem to grasp these concepts as he didn't seem to even try to follow the enemy. Sasuke would have, but even if he used Shunshin a few times, he wouldn't be able to catch up because he had started so far behind the enemy. Sasuke caught sight of the enemy trying to throw a kunai back at them, but the wind took care of it mostly, just like it had with Naruto's shuriken, and sent it skewing offcourse and away from Naruto and Sasuke.
So, with a sigh, Sasuke rejoined Naruto and the two headed out back to Konoha. "Naruto... Tsunade-sama was telling me about how she wanted to make me the next Hokage. She was afraid that you would break out in tears when she announced it, so she wanted me to tell you in private. What do you think? Soon I'll be what you always dreamed you would."
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